Silence is meaningless
until it surrounds you...Of this dream, of sunshine on Sundays...
I meet with silence alone...I'd need a premonition to believe...
But I'd love the warmth of hope...The one sorrow I cannot face...
That remembrance of happier days...I want what I couldn't have then...I get what I cannot take now.
Poetic justice fails to amuse me.
Your words are deep. They travel to the centre of my soul.
when poetry fails,i give up.
Your thoughts echo in silence :)
amazingly beautiful..!
exactly my sentiments raaji. but ur words are amazing.
Ur words are touching..!you write very well portraying deep feelings in simple words..:)
if you cant understand silences, you cant understand words.....
Impressed! beautifully expressed.You can't feel silence unless you start getting the sensation of that loud and intense noice going inside you. Keep it up!
a beautiful poem........
gud wrk..
cheers :)
words straight from the heart... :)
" i want what I couldn't have then, I get what I cannot take now..." -- the best lines, I believe. A reader's delight.